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I want to describe a town. It is called Tuma. It’s a small town with the population of about 6 thousand people.
There aren’t theatres and museums, historical and memorial places.
The city is not far from Moscow about 200 km. or so.
A few years ago I arrived in this city for several hours.
The purpose of the visit was a meeting with the leader of the dairy production.
When I arrived in town I saw a lot of people on the street and I noticed that people have similarities So their faces were covered with bruises and abrasions.
Many people have the deep blue nose and swollen face And most importantly all the people were absolutely drunk although it was a working day.
Then I saw a woman who was sitting in a puddle. she could not continue his journey because her legs would not obey.
I decided to find out the direction for dairy and I asked the three gentlemen who were standing near the store.
I said : Hello. Do you know where is the dairy production? They did not say anything.
They looked at me and wondered because they have never seen a sober person who do not have a face with bruising and abrasions.
When I entered the office of director of the factory I saw an unshaven man in a blue tracksuit. It was not a big surprise. He was drunk too.
When I left the city I was very happy because I strongly knew. I’ll never come back to this terrible place.

там, где у тебя идет речь о том, что недалеко от москвы, пишешь не about, а approximately 200 km
не purpose, а occasion
It’s a small town with the population of — with A population of

There aren’t theatres and museums, historical and memorial places. — There aren’t theaters or museums, historical or memorial places.

When I arrived in town — in THE town (vs уже о конкретном городе говорим)

a lot of people on the street — IN the street

I noticed that people have similarities — HAD (согласование времен)

Many people have the deep blue nose — A deep blue nose

she could not continue his journey — HER journey

I asked the three gentlemen who were standing near the store. — I asked three gentlemen who were standing near a store (the не нужно в обоих случаях)

Do you know where the dairy production is? ПОРЯДОК слов

They looked at me and wondered because they have never seen a sober person who do not have a face with bruising and abrasions. — They looked at me and wondered because they HAD never seen a sober person who DID not have a face with bruising and abrasions. (согласование времен!)

When I left the city I was very happy because I strongly knew. I’ll never come back to this terrible place.- When I left the city I was very happy because I knew FOR SURE I would never come to this terrible place back again.

I want to describe a town. It’s called Tuma. It’s a small town with a population of about 6 thousand people.
There aren’t any theatres and museums, historical or memorial places.
The city is not far from Moscow, about 200 km, or so.
A few years ago I was there for few hours.
The purpose of my visit was a meeting with the leader of dairy production.
When I arrived in town I saw a lot of people on the street and I noticed that they had similarities. Their faces were covered with bruises and abrasions.
Many people’s noses were a deep blue color and their faces were swollen. And most importantly all the people were absolutely drunk although it was a work day.
Then I saw a woman who was sitting in a puddle. She could not continue her journey because her legs would not obey.
I decided to find directions to the dairy farm/company and I asked three gentlemen who were standing near a store.
I said : Hello! Do you know where the dairy farm/company is? They did not say anything.
They looked at me and wondered because they have never seen a sober person or a person who do not have a face with bruising and abrasions.
When I entered the office of the director of the factory I saw an unshaven man in a blue tracksuit. It was not a big surprise. He was drunk too.
When I left the city I was very happy because I strongly knew I’ll never come back to this terrible place.